Tuesday, 1 May 2012

Number 1 - 'Raining Still'


Little love, all fast asleep.

The blackbird outside is singing in the rain.  Leaves are freshly watered, the puddles are deep, and the ground is soggy.

“Lovely weather . . . for ducks”, I’m told.  “Yes.  But I’m not a duck, and I don’t like it!” I retort.

Spring has sprung, but she’s in hiding.  I hope she reveals herself soon.

Rain, rain go away.  Come again another day.

She sleeps still.

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[72 words]

2 comments:

  1. I love this. It has a poetic feel. :) Great start Jane!

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    1. Oh, thank you! That makes me feel really happy! :D

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